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2021/12 Vol.124

機構模型

工部大学校の「機械学」教育機器(機械遺産第100号)

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年代未詳/真鍮、鉄、木製台座/H250, W400, D300(mm)/東京大学総合研究博物館所蔵

工科大学もしくは工学部の備品番号「工キ學ニ二一〇」の木札付。本模型の年代は未詳であるが、東京大学総合研究博物館には工部大学校を示すプレート付きのものを含め、近代的な機械学教育のために明治期以降に導入された機構模型が現存する。

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Write Your Science Right・研究を世界に届ける文章力

第12回 10 Tips to Shorten the Length of Your Research Paper

第12回

10 Tips to Shorten the Length of Your Research Paper

Sticking to a given word count limit is difficult for everyone while writing a research article. This includes native English speakers, who usually have so much to say but have to remember to keep it short. This is also especially true for English-second language authors, who find it quite difficult to write concisely because they cannot find the correct words to substitute long phrases.

When preparing the first draft of your manuscript, it’s best to keep the journal requirements in mind and try to write as concisely as possible. After you’ve written your first draft, you can look through your manuscript critically to find text that can be made more concise and sentences that can be shortened.

Without further ado, here are 10 useful tips that you can easily use to keep your manuscript concise:

 

1. Use citations

Look out for sentences that start with “there is a previous study on,” “it has been reported that,” or similar phrases. Such sentences should be accompanied by reference citations, which make the above phrases redundant. These phrases can be deleted, leaving only the citation.

 Example 

Original: It has been reported that the incidence of Alzheimer’s disease increases with age (Rogue et al., 2004). (17 words)

RevisedIt has been reported that tThe incidence of Alzheimer’s disease increases with age (Rogue et al., 2004). (12 words)

 

2. Make better use of parentheses

Sentences that have product names in them can be shortened by shifting the product name within parentheses.

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